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Saturday, January 29, 2011

the penultimate stone (aros 30)

                        
                          here goes
                          the penultimate stone
                          (there's an end of term feeling
                          about it)

                          but it's cast now
                          and sends ripples far and wide
                          that become part of the bigger stream
                          the deeper river
                          the ocean of creativity
                          that's out there  
                        

2 comments:

  1. Well put. You've caught my feelings too, here in this final stone. I don't want the month to end--but I know that it won't in a way because the ripples have spread so far and wide.

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  2. Great poem, I really like your writing style in poetry. In few words you manage to bring across deeper meaning. Love it!

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